While some believe the growth of aviation industry should happen exponentially without any curtailment, others think the administration should contain it. In my opinion, although grown of this sector is essential, other alternatives to this type of commute needs to be promoted.
On the one hand, it is believed by many that limitless growth of air travel is crucial. This is because with this type of mechanical equipment we can travel farthest distances in the shortest possible time. Additionally, with contemporary developments we get world-class facilities round the clock while we are in transit. For instance, if I plan to go my native place by flight, which is 2000kms away from my work place, I save more than 18 clock hours and it is a significant amount of time saving that I get. In contrast, sometime we notice in the news that people get stranded for several hours at the airport because of air traffic congestion. If such incidents happen with us, we end-up spending similar hours that as a bus or a train.
On the other hand, many people think and I agree that the aviation industry should grow in a controlled manner. This is because jet needs fossil fuel to operate and as a byproduct of their operation, we get CO2, which is responsible for global warming. A study conducted,for example, by Oxford university suggests that jet fuel consumption contributes to global warming by 12 percent. They have further added, if we promote this industry, we may exaggerate global warming to a certain extent. Thus, government must limit flight usage only for key routes.
In conclusion, though air travel brings us time savings, it costs the environment. Therefore, I personally think we must find alternatives such as Hyperloop and Bullet train to air travel which are non-polluting, work on renewable resources and are as fast as a aeroplane.
- As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you thing the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment? 84
- Nowadays many parents believe that children's usage of tablets or computers would be good for their future academic career.What are the advantage and disadvantage of such belief. Give reasons for your answer and include an relevant examples from your know 67
- Nowadays cultures of different countries are becoming more similar than they used to be What are the reason Is it a positive or a negative development Give your own opinion and examples 98
- While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 84
- Many small businesses are being forced to close because they are unable to compete with multinational corporations What are the problems of this cause and how can those problems be solved 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'travel the farthest'.
Suggestion: travel the farthest
...his type of mechanical equipment we can travel farthest distances in the shortest possible time...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...le for global warming. A study conducted,for example, by Oxford university suggests ...
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Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'airing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: airing
...ives such as Hyperloop and Bullet train to air travel which are non-polluting, work o...
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Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n to air travel which are non-polluting, work on renewable resources and are as f...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... renewable resources and are as fast as a aeroplane.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 937.175257732 166% => OK
No of words: 310.0 206.0 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00967741935 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93950274345 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 127.690721649 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 290.88556701 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.08212587 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.533333333 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 4.34317383033 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197760695351 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675617779852 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855582831835 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127297624435 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755623612485 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 41.2886597938 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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