The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly.
explain how this is effecting you and neighbours
suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir/Ma'am,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the serious problem.I live in vikas nagar area and we are facing huge difficulties due to rubbish collected in our area is not dumped properly.The system has been made for this purpose is not working effectively.They don't collect garbage on daily basis.Also, there is no proper management of throwing our household garbages.Local resident has to deal with so many issues because of this.This is contributing some health related problems however, we are taking so many precautions to avoid that.Additionally, senior citizens and children are more prone to any kind of infection that can be caused by garbages.Also, so many types of insects are developing in our neighbourhood, which is i am sure because of this only.
I would really appreciate that if you could take serious action to provide solution of this problem.We request a proper garbage collection rule should be made. There should be defined time for this process, so that all the people be aware of the timing. As well as, proper dustbins should be places in every area. There should be provision of dumping different type of waste in different dustbins for instance, wet waste and dry waste should be dumped in different boxes.
Thanking you in advance i will look forward for quick action from your team in this regards.
Your faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eal with so many issues because of this.This is contributing some health related pro...
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...aking so many precautions to avoid that.Additionally, senior citizens and children are more ...
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...ward for quick action from your team in this regards. Your faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, well, as to, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05701754386 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95949299706 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 245.987721612 44.8134815571 549% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.166666667 76.5299724578 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.0 16.8248392259 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 4.34317383033 338% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266014272815 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11817364754 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713530798801 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161878500766 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575282172953 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 8.37731958763 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 7.45979381443 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 8.62886597938 672% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 8.15463917526 711% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.