Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a resident of Aparna community located in the town council of Phoenix. I thought I should inform you regarding the challenges our community is facing with waste collection system. Currently, the system employed to dispose the garbage is highly dependant on the Municipality staff and the vehicles they use.
As the trucks used are pretty old, collected waste spills from the van when they return back after collecting the garbage. So, it causes the whole compound area to stink with foul smells. As a consequence, I and our neighbours are experiencing health issues e.g. nausea.
Would you kindly get the trucks upgraded to have a closed setup or at least get the vehicles repaired? We have been paying the taxes on time so we expect such instances are not repeated. However, our repetitive complaints seem to have no effect.
Hope to see some action to address this.
Yours Sincerely,
Shyam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...ployed to dispose the garbage is highly dependant on the Municipality staff and the vehic...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ted waste spills from the van when they return back after collecting the garbage. So, it ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., however, regarding, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98717948718 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6364161916 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724358974359 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5971543859 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7272727273 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1567400181 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519426054625 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490826322722 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688231696299 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502416155098 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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