The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly.This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.Write a letter to the local council.In your letter:
– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
– Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
– Suggest what should be done about the problem
I am a citizen in the Arizona area and 16th Street where you work in your local council.I'm writing a letter of complaint to you about garbage collection.
The people in this area collect garbage is not doing their job properly, and a lot of waste is dumped into the ground when the garbage is transported.Most of our street is full of garbage and the unpleasant smell is in the air.This has caused a lot of problems for all the neighbors. First, the bad smell of garbage can't live on that street and this waste has increased the growth of eyelashes, flies and other insects .Secondly, when children are playing in the street, they may have access to these wastes.In general, these wastes can cause illness to nearly one hundred people with respiratory problems.
With the information I gained there are many ways to transfer waste. But the best way to do this is to separate the waste.So that they would have a big bag for more waste so that the water doesn't get into the ground when the waste is shipped.And for the rest of the garbage, it is better to throw it in the garbage truck more cautiously.and it is better for workers to be provided with automatic tools so that they do not have to take the garbage by hand.
I hope you will consider my suggestions.I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Daniali
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, may, second, secondly, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64435146444 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57414345503 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569037656904 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.202911864 44.8134815571 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.571428571 76.5299724578 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.1428571429 16.8248392259 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223541234023 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103728495457 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898925187744 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125786251273 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930849553772 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 8.37731958763 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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