Task 1: You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Madam,
I am writing this letter to share my interest to work in our Company’s Head Office at London for six months.
Last month, I completed five years in your esteemed organisation. My performance ratings for the last three years have been outstanding and consecutively for this period, I have been awarded with the Employee of the Month. As per the policy, I am meeting the criteria to be the most suitable candidate amongst the three others in the list.
Also, the roles and responsibilities that I am taking care of are mostly online. I can easily contact our clients remotely through the internet. Hence, my present work will not suffer as I will fulfil all my duties diligently through mails, messages and calls. No doubt there will be a time difference of four and a half hours, but that will not be a concern. So, this will neither hamper my availability nor my work.
I would request you to please consider this request and assist me in taking this forward from the office.
Yours faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80225988701 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69614085765 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.974863027 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197777475978 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683283502002 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858351396442 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129615567757 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119472532091 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.