You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ..................,
Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to grant me permission and make arrangements to spend around six months in our head office located in India.
I have been working in this organization as a project operator for around a year now, yet there are few issues that are not tackled such as time management focus on one objective, vision selection, and other field based skills. All the staffs are dedicated, however unmanaged skills as such is stopping us to be competitive than others. If this problem is not solved, I am afraid our company will not be in the position as it is now. The work-management skills taught in Indian head office is far better; therefore I want to learn much for from the office in the interval of six months.
When I am gone I will be handling few works online, whereas other tasks will be carried out by Mr. ABC, who does know almost all the task I do. In case of emergency, I can help him to conduct task and provide guidance over the phone too. I firmly believe that he can assist well and the company will not have any interruption in workflow.
As I have not been to India I would like to request you to talk to the manager of the head office and make few arrangements regarding my stay there. Also, if possible it would be better if extra training to boost my skill is provided; this enables me to change the working style of our organization by providing such training in our office.
Hope you will understand the goal of my stay in head office and grant me permission and make arrangements as required.
Hope to hear positive response from you soon.
Yours Sincere,
NAME
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sion and make arrangements as required. Hope to hear positive response from you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, such as, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 937.175257732 143% => OK
No of words: 294.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55102040816 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56249573207 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4437712591 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276294608377 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880150979707 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753507413565 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122904257407 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631730348641 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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