Task 2 Compares about how many students chose certain University subjects in 2005

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Task 2:Compares about how many students chose certain University subjects in 2005.

The given bar chart compares about how many students chose certain University subjects in 2005.
Overall, it can be seen that Social Sciences and Languages were the most popular courses for females, while Sciences and Mathematics remained the most preferred subjects among boys.

In detail, around 24,000 females chose social sciences, considerably higher than the males at about 14,000. Also, the total (24,000) was the peak level as compared to other subjects. Next came Languages with approximately 18,000 for girls vs 2,000 for boys, making it (2,000) the least total in the year. Sciences stood at just over 20,000 (boys), which was relatively twice as much as the females at around 10,000. As for Mathematics, females stood at 4,000, which was nowhere near as close as males with 18,000.

In contrast, the remaining subjects for both genders were not as popular as the discussed courses. Literature was chosen by 15,000 males, which was a bit larger than the counterparts at 12,000. The net figure for Humanities were equal at 12,000 each for both sexes. While females dominated the arts with 9,000 vs 3,000 (boys), males surpassed Law with 10,000 vs 6000 (girls) respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, as for, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11917098446 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47487305618 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.172725806 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8181818182 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126152886253 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084902001816 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203859617936 0.0603063233224 338% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200963546879 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.302120101944 0.0580467560999 520% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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