Dear Mr. Waseem,
I have received your letter yesterday. It is really pleasure for me I give you better alternates and solution regarding reception improvement.
Firstly, according to my point of view, good ambitions are the key point of every orginization. If you really want to improve that, try to arrange proper training to your employees in the form of customer dealing, problems solving query and many more etc.
Secondly, the most important tool is that, you can note down pick timing of customers when the reception area is fully crowded. You will always hear this proverb customers are kings. So, always try to feel them special. Resolve their query in very positive manners.
On the other hand, you can daily check the service quality report. This report will show you where your organization is standing now?
Furthermore, you can implement floor management services. This is very useful tip for customers satisfaction. If they will enter the branch someone ask him may I help you sir or madam? I think it is the best possibility for resolving reception immense issue.
If you need further help or any kind of query you can contact me on my personal number 0098765335667.
You're sincerely,
Sara moor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'pleasured'.
Suggestion: pleasured
...ved your letter yesterday. It is really pleasure for me I give you better alternates and...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the service quality report. This report will show you where your organization is...
^^
Line 11, column 149, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
.... If they will enter the branch someone ask him may I help you sir or madam? I thin...
^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You're
...on my personal number 0098765335667. Youre sincerely, Sara moor.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, i think, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08374384236 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68747091879 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674876847291 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5668642414 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6875 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201107522278 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621404356636 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058542027297 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093607455915 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494389553872 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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