Everyone yhas different opinion about subjects.Whether, it is History or Science and technology.According to my point of view both are significant for our youth and country development.It is debatable topic I will discuss both point with relevant example.
At begin with, history is the identification of every nation.Even no one remember you with your name.However, if you have strong history record regarding your country war, establishment, age, colour, size, music and food etc.You can represent your country with true colours, that's why parents wants that their children should know about the tradition of the country.For instances, Pakistani flag is the true example of history.They divided in to two colour green and white, during the war the Pakistani solider conveyed their message to enemy they wanted peace or love, thats why they selected this colour.
On the other hand,science and technology are the basic pillar of every country without it the growth and development of country creates immense issue.For example, Abdul Qadir, is the first scientist who made the first atomic necular item in Pakistan,it is really difficult for us when they did not get science and technology degree, because according to this nuclear power we have counted in development country.
It put it in nutshell, I pen down saying that, both subjects are useful for human growth, country development and environmental succeed.I personally beleive that, every subject is valuable we shouldnot compare it to any subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, regarding, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24590163934 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91446180467 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643442622951 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2820377518 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15397426389 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635914901921 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298143884205 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096297439403 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320357360787 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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