Nowadays, Social media marketing are the life blood of society, especially for youth. It is irrefutable that, we have totally dependent on it in the form of buy and sale online commodity, online business, social networking and many more. In my opinion, I agree with that, social medium marketing can easily influence to consumer in effective manners through commodity. I shall put my both views with revelant examples.
As far as concerned, marketing materials is always playing significant role in overall society. According to my point of view, if i talk about the past year so, mostly people bought their commodity through domestic market. However, nowadays, society has became smarter and they implement new technology advancement with the help of social media market. There are many examples, During the any species of videos when we are watching advertisements on YouTube and Facebook. It has influenced people for purchase various types of online commodity. On the other hand, social media market makes people life so much easy, they can purchase and sale their stuff with the help of different website just like OLX and daraz.pk. While, this methods can safe your money your time etc.
Furthermore, this method is not useful for an old people. According to their point of view, they does not satisfy online marketing. They are totally dependenting in manual domestic market and products.
I put In it nutshell, I pen down saying that, socail media market flow are mounting day by day and they reduce unemployment ratio. Even people has developed their idea through the business instead socail networking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ent website just like OLX and daraz.pk. While, this methods can safe your money your ...
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...site just like OLX and daraz.pk. While, this methods can safe your money your time e...
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... According to their point of view, they does not satisfy online marketing. They are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19083969466 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63018919995 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2844663734 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152186287161 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473941021749 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544757056316 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855433346289 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622607389816 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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