On the first hand, what are the reasons behind it? Firstly, there are alot of people are busy to do their 10:00AM to 8:00PM jobs and it is a huge time of job. For example, if we talk about hospital staffs, they have not fixed time of their duties.So, how it is possible they will do exercise? Secondly, today people are mostly depending on frozen food and fast food. It is also a cause of unhealthine and plethora of diseases. We should always apply for different kind of remadies to improve and decline the ratio of unhealthy lifestyle.
On the other hand, we can improve this problems with the help of society, government instead individuals. At begin with, government should implement the different kind of physical activities in school and college, just because of healthy lifestyle, especially for juveniles. Moreover, In workholic place senior managements should be provided basic healthcare to their staff. Regular checkup will reduce the cause of uncertainty of health.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, unhealthy diet and lack of exercise is the cause of heart diseases, blood pressure and many more. We should always try to live healthy and stable life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...hey have not fixed time of their duties.So, how it is possible they will do exerci...
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Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ill do exercise? Secondly, today people are mostly depending on frozen food and fast food. It is als...
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Line 1, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hine and plethora of diseases. We should always apply for different kind of remad...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e. On the other hand, we can improve this problems with the help of society, gove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.925 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61139330626 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6719693135 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142246568112 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441208841532 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362897361222 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800393895976 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419949911377 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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