Dear Sir,
My name is Anna.I belong to Lahore Pakistan. I am writing this letter just because of yesterday I had immigration appointment but due to some serious causes unfortunately, I could not attend the appointment.
Firstly, yesterday when I was going to attend appointment I had an accident in road.It was serious incident my car main head light and front mirror had damaged.Even I was also injured, my ankle was fully in pain. Furthermore, I could not move my hand.So, driving was really inconvenient for me.
After that, when I reached hospital. It was rus just because of uncertainty cases. So, it was bad luck to me I was in waiting list since two to three hours.
It is my humble request to you, if you give me another opportunity and conduct my immigration interview tomorrow. I should be thankful to you. My whole career is dependent on it.
You can contact me on my number is 0012567898.
I will wait for your urgent response.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Anna.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84795321637 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88809563653 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4110797143 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7692307692 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157348363315 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584858030794 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575265858985 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796417322236 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055950678834 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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