Focusing on physical and non physical appearance is always be significant. It is irrefutable that today majority of people are conscious about their health, Lifestyle and looks rather than yesteryear. I intend to agreed this statement. Moreover, I will debate this topic with relevant examples.
At begin with, we are living in modern society, where people are focused their look and style etc. I believe that there are two types of trends are available in global market. Firstly, Fashion world and secondly, Physical and non physical appearances. Fashion trend was always be inn the market and majority of people are love to implement it because they try to look good and updated such as actress, model, entertainer etc. However, but we lives in mix up community in the form of middle level, low level and upper level people whereas, people cannot afford this kind of things because they have very limited amount of earning through salaries or per day wages. At that time most of the individual try to compare itself to other person and result is that anxiety, depression and complex behavior have generated.
On the other hand, physical and non physical appearances are important in our daily basis life. For instances, when a person go for interview for particular post, an examiner ask him query regarding his qualification and work experience they always notice that how person speak? they have confidence or not, what they wear at work place? how component they are for this post so this is a time when we can prove ourselves because we are facing plethora amount of challenges right now and sense of choice bestow us right path of direction. Non physical appearance are using everywhere right now in the form of telly marketing, selling etc. For example, most of the people are making customers through telephonic conversation and the reason behind it they guide them very positively regarding products and services, they have good verbal communication power which means that the role of appearance is always important.
To put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that appearance has intensively involved in our society and it is good way for improving yourself at everywhere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...l and non physical appearance is always be significant. It is irrefutable that tod...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...model, entertainer etc. However, but we lives in mix up community in the form of midd...
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Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ges. At that time most of the individual try to compare itself to other person an...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ey always notice that how person speak? they have confidence or not, what they wear ...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
...e or not, what they wear at work place? how component they are for this post so thi...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this post so this is a time when we can prove ourselves because we are facing pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03581267218 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6488717101 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581267217631 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5147172621 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.529411765 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136609659589 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450027624093 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425822850481 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890154951009 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595500865886 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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