You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged Write a letter to the potential employer In your letterTell them why you need to move the interview timeAsk to change the interview da

Dear Sir,
My name Is Zara Noor, I am from Pakistan Karachi. I am writing this letter because, I just want to move my interview schedule after the one month. In couple of week ago, I fixed my interview timing, However, It will be tough for me because I cannot come on that date.

Firstly, I would like to mention here, yesterday, I had received my examination schedule from my university. It has organized urgent examination just because of immense issues of country. However, It is my final year and I cannot afford any kind of risk because I want to get first division for my examination.

I have very limited time period, Even, I need more time for preparation and practice. That's why I requested to you, kindly delay my interview schedule.

I shall be very thankful to you.

If, you need any query you can contact me on my number 002455789552565.

My email address is, zaranoor@gmail.com.

Yours sincerely,
Zara noor.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...more time for preparation and practice. Thats why I requested to you, kindly delay my...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... I shall be very thankful to you. If, you need any query you can contact me ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96371518229 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66049382716 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9501166754 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.25 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177677112413 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713196769346 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781671215762 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105693679617 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767032148394 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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