Dear Mr.John,
Hope you are fine, My name is Zara noor. I m an employee of your company AS solution. Yesterday I had received an email from company side. Even, they required an Economic analyses.
First of all, I would like to mention here, I am doing part time job as an accountant in AS solution. There are several reason. At couple of year ago, I had started to do master in Economics at Karachi university. So, it was quite difficult task for me I could do full time job.
However, now my master in Economic has completed and I have gotten second position in overall university. So, I take the decision I will start full time job in AS solution because it is one of the most reputed company in all over the country.
Your current position is really suitable for me. I will do my best because I know the basic terms and conditions regarding this company. Furthermore, if, you give me this oppurtunity, I will try to make this orginization more profitable.
If you want to do any other query, you can contact to Mr Huda, he is an Human resources manager. I have submitted my all documents to him.
I will wait for your positive reaction.
Yours sincerely,
Zara noor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
Dear Mr.John, Hope you are fine, My name is Zara no...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... would like to mention here, I am doing part time job as an accountant in AS solution. Th...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...an accountant in AS solution. There are several reason. At couple of year ago, I had started t...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... quite difficult task for me I could do full time job. However, now my master in Econo...
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Line 6, column 144, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...y. So, I take the decision I will start full time job in AS solution because it is one of...
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Line 10, column 70, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...uery, you can contact to Mr Huda, he is an Human resources manager. I have submitt...
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Line 10, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
... can contact to Mr Huda, he is an Human resources manager. I have submitted my all docume...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, really, regarding, second, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55140186916 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64084434789 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3427309277 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.2941176471 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5882352941 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257856596271 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781613861713 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062405816604 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124783004552 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329528996351 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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