There have been several complains about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
- Describe the complaints that have been made.
- Say why the reception area is importa
Dear Mr. Jake,
I am John Deep, and I am writing as a respond to your request to the needed improvements in the reception area.
The first point I would like to raise is the kind of complaints which appeared lately in our hotel such as the lake in the chair's number and not all the guests are able to find a place to take a seat. Plus, rooms are not ready ontime for the visitors.
Another issue I forgot to mention is that the management does not have a previouse aware with the specific number of guests to be well prepared for a well-received.
At the end, I would like to make sure that the reception area is prepared in the best way as it is the front of the business ; moreover, the more it is arranged, the more visitors the place gets.
should you require any further information, you may conact me on my WhatsApp number; here is my number:5586639827
faithfully yours,
Safaa Hussein
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Jake, I am John Deep, and I am writing as a re...
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Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... I am John Deep, and I am writing as a respond to your request to the needed improveme...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...The first point I would like to raise is the kind of complaints which appeared la...
^^
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are not ready ontime for the visitors. Another issue I forgot to mention is tha...
^^^
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...umber of guests to be well prepared for a well-received. At the end, I would like to make sur...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Should
..., the more visitors the place gets. should you require any further information, yo...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...App number; here is my number:5586639827 faithfully yours, Safaa Hussein
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number:5586639827 faithfully yours, Safaa Hussein
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, well, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45180722892 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64849426174 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632530120482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4336748171 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 16.8248392259 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170645273974 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683363855976 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691987945507 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872562523911 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773689141173 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.