Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to pay your attention towards inconvenience caused by your transportation company in Manurewa Region in the morning time.
Most of the people do commuting in that time for their job or study but from the last two weeks it has been seen that buses are not arriving on time. It is creating a problems in everyone’s daily routine. Now, the condition of buses are becoming worse like these are not properly clean and maintain which directly impacts the reliability of people on these services.
I am working as a teacher in school. I have to reach on time but due to inconsistent timing of buses I am reaching late from last couple of weeks Which affects my professional work. It usually takes one hour from Manurewa to reach Auckland. Therefore, bus is only way for me for commuting.
I would like to suggest that Please check on the timing schedule of the buses . Also, weather your employees are performing their duties well. It is recommend that there should be a team which look after the maintenance of public transport.
I hope you will pay attention on this matter.
Yours faithfully
Gurjeet kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86934673367 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74371554648 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643216080402 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8818812936 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5384615385 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1359347955 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415422953931 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394237827211 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596514805383 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448902552228 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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