There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I intend to write this letter to grab your attention to an important issue. I am using your bus service for more than 5 years. It's very unfortunate to say that the quality of the bus services is not consistent anymore. There are certain issues being faced by frequent bus travelers. First of all, your bus drivers are not at all punctual; most of the times, the bus driver skips my area route altogether. Another important issue that requires your immediate review is that the ticket collectors sometimes charge more than regular fare without any rational justification.
I have to reach office every morning at sharp 9:00 am and travel time from my home to the office is approximately 20 minutes. I often get late from office as the bus does not come in time on my route. The day bus drivers do not come at all, I have to hire the cab to go to the office; which obviously costs me way more than bus fare.
I would like you to review routes distribution and make sure that all buses stop at their designated points to avoid any unnecessary fatigue for commuters. Furthermore, please assign a quality controller on all the bus drivers to ensure timely arrival of buses and also approved collection of fares. I hope to see your positive and swift response against my complaints.
Yours Sincerely,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I intend to write this letter to grab yo...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gainst my complaints. Yours Sincerely, Sam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65665236052 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59388007021 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635193133047 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0881014543 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4615384615 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173007272687 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678443479043 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374365145992 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105957795396 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626163285783 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.