Dear Sir,
I am Jones Smith, a cadet of your community based rehabilitation team since 2002. I am writing to inform you that, I will not be able to continue with your organization anymore, as I am leaving for my home country once and for all.
From the time I was enrolled, it has been a wonderful journey so far, for me. I was predominantly working with the rehabilitation team, assisting the medical panel of experts. My duties mainly comprised of initial assessment of patients, who formed the indigent part of our local community. The assessment mainly included monitoring the physical, social and emotional wellness of patients.
As you may remember, I was pursuing my graduation here at Boston University. Now that my study permit has expired, I am preparing to leave for my home country in couple of weeks. Henceforth, to continue with the team, would be cumbersome.
However, it would be my pleasure, to introduce one of my junior in college, who is willing to take over my position in the team. Now, the whole charade of recruitment of a new employee, the prerequisites and all, as intended I leave it upon you. His name is Mr Jackson and he will be in contact with you soon.
Once again, I would take this opportunity to thank everyone, who stood beside me during my tenure with our NGO.
Sincerely yours
Jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: ENTIRELY_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'mainly composed of'?
Suggestion: mainly composed of
...the medical panel of experts. My duties mainly comprised of initial assessment of patients, who for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78017241379 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86886073561 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9404464171 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2142857143 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133852126411 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478106895191 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313293333901 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665893181055 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283142264894 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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