You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter:
describe the work you have been doing
explain why you can no longer do this work
recommend another person who is interested in the work.
Dear Sir,
I am Jones Smith, a cadet of your community based rehabilitation team since 2002. I am writing to inform you that, I will not be able to continue with your organization anymore, as I am leaving for my home country once and for all.
From the time I was enrolled, it has been a wonderful journey so far, for me. I was predominantly working with the rehabilitation team, assisting the medical panel of experts. My duties mainly comprised of initial assessment of patients, who formed the indigent part of our local community. The assessment mainly included monitoring the physical, social and emotional wellness of patients.
As you may remember, I was pursuing my graduation here at Boston University. Now that my study permit has expired, I am preparing to leave for my home country in couple of weeks. Henceforth, to continue with the team, would be cumbersome.
However, it would be my pleasure, to introduce one of my junior in college, who is willing to take over my position in the team. Now, the whole charade of recruitment of a new employee, the prerequisites and all, as intended I leave it upon you. His name is Mr Jackson and he will be in contact with you soon.
Once again, I would take this opportunity to thank everyone, who stood beside me during my tenure with our NGO.
Sincerely yours
Jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: ENTIRELY_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'mainly composed of'?
Suggestion: mainly composed of
...the medical panel of experts. My duties mainly comprised of initial assessment of patients, who for...
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'however', 'may', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206766917293 0.220444632235 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.165413533835 0.167888034529 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0451127819549 0.0606518309736 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0563909774436 0.0506257000042 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.127819548872 0.118615021944 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124060150376 0.107062808482 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0488721804511 0.041066498444 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86886073561 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.0385302599488 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00375939849624 0.00132118243153 285% => OK
Determiners: 0.0601503759398 0.0714148451538 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225563909774 0.0191574576366 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112781954887 0.00930345855455 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1333.0 1141.60824742 117% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.134020619 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74568965517 5.53046319177 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78085437643 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310344827586 0.284621296913 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241379310345 0.211203875043 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189655172414 0.133321485273 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133620689655 0.0843313296314 158% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86886073561 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.622163163488 98% => OK
Word variations: 63.1167253934 62.8969750728 100% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5714285714 16.4300151701 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9404464171 44.7399317507 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 90.9928171075 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.4300151701 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.357142857143 0.613754768223 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 40.7093596059 37.5504026743 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.08602150538 1.13073093955 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264127342249 0.331212695627 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0995995247036 0.0927372745006 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0859493100348 0.0736520305886 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587597496401 0.579516596996 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168507247805 0.180689518051 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954995004364 0.122183219658 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434725151923 0.0765303033291 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.181470262167 0.211926503985 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0895570171542 0.0737400523855 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147018941255 0.203819188451 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530031208808 0.067151250289 79% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.