Dear Mr Brown,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am intending to write this letter with regards to the voluntary work that I have been performing to assist the local people through your organisation. The problem is that from next week onward I will not be able to to do it any longer. Allow me to elaborate the situation that led me to take this decision.
To begin with, being a Software Engineer, I was handling the Accounts department from past two years which was indeed a huge responsibility as it was to manage all the payments, taxes and donations etc. Although, I am glad to be a part of this fantastic group because it really enhanced my experience and endurance. However, I got a new job in Delhi which is not only offering me better wages in contrast to my current job here but also giving me a promotion. Hence, I will be moving to Delhi next week.
Since, I will not be there to continue rendering my services, I would like to suggest a very reliable and diligent friend of mine who is an Accountant too and is eager to join your organisation. He will be free on weekends and on public holidays, I have attached his resume with this letter for your convenience. It is my firm belief that he will be the best person for this work.
Looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...rom next week onward I will not be able to to do it any longer. Allow me to elaborate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, really, so, as to, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47950819672 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61772981915 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1996651846 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0769230769 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213076976976 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713852519919 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079254941725 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124300679055 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107379424957 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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