Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a computer software graduate, working in I.I.T sector in a multi national company. I am writing in connection with the work-related seminar going to take place in U.S.A at New York. I came to know about this program through online, I am very keen to attend it due to the fact that I am planning to settle abroad. Hence, I want to gather some in depth knowledge about it.
Firstly, I would like you to share the precise date of this event along with the exact timing. Also, it is essential for me to understand what types of program is it and what all topics will be covered in it. Will it consists of visa application, job interview training and placement information as all these are the most requested topics.
Also, it would be nice if you could let me know about the accomodation facility because I do not know any one there. So, if it is not included in the fee then staying in a hotel will be quite expensive for me and I will have to make arrangements for it before hand.
In addition, please do tell me about the cost of this entire seminar, I am eagerly waiting for your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: T
...puter software graduate, working in I.I.T sector in a multi national company. I a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ated seminar going to take place in U.S.A at New York. I came to know about this ...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...ated seminar going to take place in U.S.A at New York. I came to know about this ...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...modation facility because I do not know any one there. So, if it is not included in the...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: BEFORE_HAND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beforehand'?
Suggestion: beforehand
...I will have to make arrangements for it before hand. In addition, please do tell me abo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44549763033 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54199913829 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620853080569 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7607038429 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2727272727 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15217281584 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507226266497 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408241369849 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893378061732 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182904722328 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.