Dear Sir,
I am a regular traveler of your public transportation. The main endeavor of writing this letter is to show my dissatisfaction against your poor bus service which I faced from the past couple of weeks. Please allow me to explain it briefly.
First of all, Driver of buses is not punctual. In other words, there is no fixed time for arrival or departure. Which is the main concerning issue for every passenger? Due to this, I reached late at work and sometimes I hired a private cab to visit my destination. Apart from this, safety is another issue which nude your attention. In my area, there are few numbers of buses run on roads so a result of it, It is overcrowded all the time. Sometimes people hang on the window or set on the roof of the buses. Thus, safety and timing both are the serious problems which need to improve.
I request you please take some strict action to migrate these hazards. I suggest If possible could you please increase the number of public transportation and also assign a person who checks time reliability frequently.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Mustafa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...window or set on the roof of the buses. Thus safety and timing both are the serious ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, first, if, so, thus, apart from, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7806122449 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75851545918 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668367346939 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6270808359 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0666666667 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138791754679 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383772331399 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435190660397 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627703820839 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608590945543 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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