There is a problem in the road outside your house.Write a letter to your local Councillor. in your letter- Introduce yourself-Explain what the problem is-Tell the councilor what you would like to be done.

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There is a problem in the road outside your house.

Write a letter to your local Councillor. in your letter

- Introduce yourself
-Explain what the problem is
-Tell the councilor what you would like to be done.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to bring to your attention a road maintenance issue just outside my house on North Road where I was living over 10 years.

My name is Ayoub. I have been a resident at number 20 North Road over 10 years, and I have never had a reason to complain to the council before. A problem with the road works closest to my house is noticed recently, and it irritates to all of us who live nearby day-by-day.

However, the road has just been completed by the assign road Contractor, a pothole has appeared on the side of the road. If it rains, the pothole will fill with water and become an invisible danger to the drivers. It is also an eyesore for those who live around.

On several occasions I tried to contact the Council offices, but nothing has been done. I would request that you address this matter personally with the road maintenance department, and that you treat it in priority to get it solved at soonest.

Please let me know with your action.

Yours faithfully,

Ayoub

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55135135135 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44283660811 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0543635012 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5454545455 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157009718078 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588023859271 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528421207746 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813362839157 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309213795591 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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