There is a problem in the road outside your house.Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letterintroduce yourselfexplain what the problem istell the councilor what you would like to be done

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to bring few issues to your notice, which I am facing for the last one week.

Let me explain the problem in detail, I am resident of Guru Tegh Bahadhur Nagar and my house is situated on street number-2. it is 20 feet wide road. Unfortunately, for the last one week there are couple of issues has been observed in the road. First problem is as you are aware last week there was heavy rain fall in our city and because of this sewerage pipe line chocked, and so far there is no maintenance has been done by city council. Second issue is street lights are also malfunctioning and due to this female and children feel insecure while crossing the street at night.

With due respect, I urge you to please take appropriate action on these issues. Our society has already reported the formal complaint to your department, but no action has been taken place. Kindly look in to this matter and issued a formal notice to responsible officer to solve the problems as soon as possible.

Your Faithfully,
Satpreet Singh

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...y house is situated on street number-2. it is 20 feet wide road. Unfortunately, fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60526315789 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44677978207 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8799540518 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143888511052 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571574447853 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382459547356 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855652228266 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00680757380281 0.0580467560999 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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