Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regard to apply for the post of "Quality Assurance Manager" which has been displayed on the university' notice board.
As per my academic qualification, I am final year student of Business Administration at Brusque University, part of this I have successfully completed one year internship at "Mothersons Automative " in Quality assurance department as a Trainee and I have gained good knowledge of experience, moreover I have implemented Agile quality system to their quality department.
Furthermore, I have published a research paper on Quality Management system in to the International journal plus I have a
I have attached my updated resume along with this letter.
Looking forward for your positive response.
Your Faithfully,
Satpreet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a; I
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Suggestion:
.... Your Faithfully, Satpreet Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 123.0 206.0 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73983739837 4.54256449028 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47423783126 2.54303337028 137% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691056910569 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.310175165 44.8134815571 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.2 76.5299724578 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 4.34317383033 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279131243633 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129579680566 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074996349832 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133941834339 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078350739651 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 8.37731958763 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 70.7449484536 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 8.71597938144 187% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 7.59969072165 143% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 8.62886597938 243% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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