You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.
Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and
• Give your reason for writing
• Tell about your education
• Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I’m writing this letter to you for applying for the job of quality assurance manager. I recently joined the 2016-2018 batch of business administration. My work experience and qualification definitely suits me for this job.
I am studying MBA program at the university and wanted to work concurrently. The courses which were offered also include subject dedicatedly referring to quality assurance management programs.
Before joining for Master’s in the university, I have worked as a project manager in the multi-national software company where I had leaded a team of 20 people. Whole product delivery was done under my supervision. In addition, Client and employee relationship and introducing new strategies which can improve the quality, efficiency and effectiveness of the code. I have an experience of 13 years out of which I’ve delivered the best as project lead for 5 years.
I would be really grateful to you if you could consider me for this job. Any time, I’m available for interview.
Thank you for considering. I look forward to meeting you in near future.
Yours Sincerely
Tanul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (MBA) must be used with a third-person verb: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
...s me for this job. I am studying MBA program at the university and wanted to work co...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264840182648 0.220444632235 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.13698630137 0.167888034529 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.041095890411 0.0606518309736 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.041095890411 0.0506257000042 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0913242009132 0.118615021944 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114155251142 0.107062808482 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0593607305936 0.041066498444 145% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.15035554749 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0228310502283 0.0385302599488 59% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0730593607306 0.0714148451538 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.013698630137 0.0191574576366 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0182648401826 0.00930345855455 196% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1164.0 1141.60824742 102% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.134020619 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.32608695652 5.53046319177 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385869565217 0.284621296913 136% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.336956521739 0.211203875043 160% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.233695652174 0.133321485273 175% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163043478261 0.0843313296314 193% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.15035554749 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684782608696 0.622163163488 110% => OK
Word variations: 74.3986869187 62.8969750728 118% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 12.9587628866 116% => OK
Sentence length: 12.2666666667 16.4300151701 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9631813001 44.7399317507 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 90.9928171075 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2666666667 16.4300151701 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.613754768223 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 45.9623188406 37.5504026743 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.62711864407 1.13073093955 144% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441249381599 0.331212695627 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0528593900625 0.0927372745006 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0458357537705 0.0736520305886 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.543146225435 0.579516596996 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17223992304 0.180689518051 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138378023197 0.122183219658 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091531754247 0.0765303033291 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.149007898436 0.211926503985 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0650553421182 0.0737400523855 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238397354663 0.203819188451 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674504033391 0.067151250289 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.