Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the faulty product which I received from your website.
I had purchased a 40-inch television on 12th March 2018 and invoice number for this order is ABC-9856. It is full HD tv made by Sony India Ltd. As per the term and conditions mentioned on your website, the product comes under shipment insurance any sort of damage will be beared by your company.
However, When I got my order everything was looking perfect, the product was packed properly but when I open the packaging I found that display panel is broken. Immediately I called your customer support number and registered a complaint about the incident, issue number assigned to me is 12348. your support executive person told me I have to send back the product, I followed the instructions and returned the product on the following day.
It has been almost one week, but so far I did not get any confirmation about the refund of the amount. Could you please look into this matter, so that I can get my money back as soon as possible. I have enclosed the photocopy of the purchase order for your reference. Hope you will take appropriate action on this issue and I will get the refund amount soon.
Your Faithfully,
Satpreet Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... damage will be beared by your company. However, When I got my order everything ...
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...urned the product on the following day. It has been almost one week, but so far ...
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...refund amount soon. Your Faithfully, Satpreet Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71363636364 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55101260076 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2904957408 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142553746878 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493934971745 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383922578396 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084975847555 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515790341673 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.