Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to an advertisment printed on last sunday edition mentioned that you are organising and award giving event for to a person who had done enormous work for the society and local residents, and you have given the opportunity to the readers to give their opinion, so I would like to suggest the name of the person which I thought really deserve this award.
As per my opinion , Most deserving person is our city's mayor Mr. Jan , he has done tremandously great work for our city , as we all know in the past our city was not well connected with the road , rail network, also there were no college for higher education, but once he elected as a city mayor, the image of our city has been changing day by day. Now, our town is well connected with road and rail, also a new college has been constructed for the youth, moreover, because of his efforts many financialy poor students got scholership.
Finally, I personally feel that it would be wonderful award if you make a statue of him, so that people will never forget him and his effort.
Hope you will consider my suggestion.
Your Faithfully,
Satpreet Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57416267943 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47263227742 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688995215311 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.577408467 44.8134815571 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.333333333 76.5299724578 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.8333333333 16.8248392259 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 4.34317383033 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993516993053 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502236439791 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437319655242 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563347976159 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472492374271 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 8.37731958763 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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