Dear John,
hope you are doing great!
I am so glad to tell you that Chinese Spring festival is coming, which I want to invite you and your family come and join this great moment with us.
It is huge celebrity in China that could compare to Christmas in western country. We have different day on this festival because it is use lunar calendar to calculate the exact day of festival which is in one month. Let me tell you more detail about this festival. Before lunar calendar 1st of January, we purchase foods and drinks for all the family members, people also buy clothes and fireworks for their children. On the new year evening, family stay together and talk about everything they enjoy, watching TV is the part of activity at that night. We will visit our relatives and neighbours to share the joy and happiness in the following days.
The festival is not only about eating or drinking but also to close ourself with family and friend. That is the reason why I hope you could be here with my family and I because you are my best friend. This is the wonderful time for me to have you. My family expected you can make this as well.
This is so important to me so I hope you can consider it and reply me soon.
Kind regards.
Joe
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- You are planning a 2 day work training outside your city next month Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding accommodation arrangement for your visit In your letter you should tell 4 introduce yourself and your company 5 ask availability of th 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42608695652 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19900303927 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.618429131 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8333333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112408033904 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036665327768 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399850080095 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672292315839 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469784192513 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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