It is true for some people to feel less happy and isolating to live in the increasing high-rise apartment in the urban area, others think this has some benefits. I am unsure whether this is pros or cons, and will, therefore share my personal opinion.
There are some benefits for people to live in a city apartment. First and foremost, young people could more independent to stay in their own place to learn how to live without parents and old friends. It is a better chance for one to boost their confidence to use their life skills from the university after graduating. In the beginning, youth were to feel isolate and alone if they would not go out to make new friends in the urban core. Once they gain numerous life skills such as social life from realistic, they will understand the key of life is not just live in the building but also to extent their life boundary by themselves. Moreover, people live in the urban core, who less have traffic problems and certain costs such as petrol and parking. The time that they saved will benefit them tremendously that they lost.
One of the negatives to living in this type of building in the downtown is that people share walls but less know their neighbor not as if in the rural area. In the city area, people tend to read the news or get in touch with friends online instead of talking face to face.
To sum up, There are many reasons for people to live in the high-rise apartment in the city area and I believed it benefits people more than their losses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...s or cons, and will, therefore share my personal opinion. There are some benefits for people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49275362319 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26367811434 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547101449275 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0862358415 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16884750179 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671211164562 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789103913883 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130057234974 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740447540285 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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