Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, more and more high-rise buildings have sprung up in central cities. High-rise living is assumed by some people to be bad since high-rise apartments cause people to feel lonely and unhappy. However, others believes high-rise buildings own many merits. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of such apartments.
People who live in high-rise apartments tent to feel lonely. They find it difficult to maintain an enduring relationship with each other, because most of them only rent apartments and move around a lot. They hardly communicate with neighbors, so the sense o...
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others believes high-rise buildings own many merits.
others believe high-rise buildings own many merits.
People who live in high-rise apartments tent to feel lonely.
People who live in high-rise apartments tend to feel lonely.
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