It is fast growing high-rise apartments in the urban area, someone thinks there are negative of living in those building blocks, which makes them feel lonely and unhappy. In my opinion, this topic is highly debatable, I will discuss in this essay.
One of the reasons that the person lives in the city blocks is the lack of social life. After overtime work, several individuals go to bed early or play video games at home. Others spend some leisure time to surf on the internet to chat with their friend and family. In addition, people have to work hard in terms of paying high rent. If they acquired new skills but save some money, they should spend their free time to study at home.
There are some positive of living in the town. First and foremost, It is the best way to keep the distance of others which drive some people to feel independent. After graduating, young adults are staring gain money by their self, living in the parent's house cause nervous for them. Even the small space in the city, they will fell relaxation. Most of them will be concentration on their work or study. Another significant argument in favor is that the person who stays in the apartments that do not have responsibilities of the house, for instance, maintain the house or move the lawn. People could pay more attention to work or study. Moreover, work and live in the same area is good for a person to avoid traffic congestion. If friends live around the urban area, they will catch up easily.
In conclusion, it is true there are some drawbacks of living in the city area but my opinion is that will benefits people more that live in the rural area. The person who lives in the city apartments will happy and enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'positives'?
Suggestion: positives
...ime to study at home. There are some positive of living in the town. First and foremo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58957654723 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33230214847 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4250343479 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2777777778 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200726362124 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599203905218 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517907120985 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134284303801 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609769707867 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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