With advent of urbanization and shortage of lands, more and more people choose to live in the skyscrapers instead of traditional buildings. However, whether this tendency has positive or negative effects is still a strong argument. While there are certain drawbacks regarding to this matter, I am in the opinion that it has many advantages for a citizen.
On one hand, residents who live in luxurious tall constructions are provided with various facilities such as swimming pool, supermarkets and gyms in one complex. Hence, with an affordable annual charge they are in a pleasant condition which prepares anything for them. Also, people in high-rise apartments have a sensational view of whole city that presents tranquility and relaxing mood. More important, the modern flats usually are located in the sectors of cities which are in high social class of society. Thus, the quality of life in these spots of communities is in a great level that creates a comfort feeling with secured and safe situation for dwellers. For example, you may find rarely any crimes in vicinity of these areas during a year because of surveillance and securities prevent any strangers.
On the other hand, the disadvantages of this life-style are also varied. It is common that persons in these houses live alone and even do not communicate with their neighbors and consecutively sadness and loneliness are behind their walls. Additionally, people opine the numerous problems with the complex system of these buildings like elevator breakdown and fire happening are main concerns in their mind. For example, getting stuck in an elevator is a routine experience for any owners of this type of accommodation with a stressful story they share regularly with their friends.
In conclusion, however inhabiting in modern apartment may have many drawbacks which have been listed above, today human being can not reject living in these buildings because of their several merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
...mood. More important, the modern flats usually are located in the sectors of cities which ...
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Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put before the verb 'find'.
Suggestion: rarely find
...tion for dwellers. For example, you may find rarely any crimes in vicinity of these areas d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24840764331 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80522454681 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7656992965 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.714285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104503609694 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381679478715 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539191265749 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596809917757 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280083611514 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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