I think in twenty years , there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. I explain my opinion in following reasons.
First, the growth of internet and online activities will be the main incentive for people to stay at their place and decrease their urban transportation. Nowadays e-commerce as a common type of business model is growing fast and it causes a huge decreasing in demand for personal cars. For example why a person use car to buy a book when he or she could order that book from a website and get it in his place? So internet change people behavior to use the cars less .
Second, the growth of public transportation in cities make people needing the cars less. Some vehicles including bus , metro , train and so on will be developed in twenty years and people would roam in cities with the public transportation systems instead of own cars. Surely, in twenty years the bus stations or metro lines will be increased by the governments to encourage people not using their personal cars in comparison to the past.
Third, in economical approach , with the present rate of energy consumption in the world , and forecasts about the fossil fuels running out, demand of energy will increase and subsequently it's price will increase. So people will be reluctant to use or buy car because of the energy cost and we will face with decreasing in car using .
Finally there are many reasons that prove in twenty years we will see fewer cars in use than there are today. Reasons like pollution concerns, robotic and no-need in some human activities, but the point is definitely incontestable that the numbers of car in use will be decreased surprisingly in near future.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'for example', 'i think', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28164556962 0.229887763892 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.132911392405 0.158761421928 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0727848101266 0.0866891130778 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0411392405063 0.046263068375 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0443037974684 0.0685040099705 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136075949367 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0348101265823 0.0351676179071 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63710568269 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0189873417722 0.0309702414327 61% => OK
Particles: 0.00316455696203 0.00188951952338 167% => OK
Determiners: 0.0696202531646 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0379746835443 0.0209618222197 181% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0126582278481 0.0139019557991 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1688.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 298.0 408.028673835 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6644295302 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312080536913 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204697986577 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137583892617 0.174417080927 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0939597315436 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63710568269 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 53.9520144477 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9230769231 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3007145526 48.84282405 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.692307692308 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.3928755808 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.07246376812 1.45489161554 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465828347489 0.300154397459 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142030646914 0.103427244359 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0906166549129 0.0752933317313 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.644081607737 0.497263757937 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139089661782 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236245514187 0.114077575197 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.263137795192 0.0781384742642 337% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288191238042 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104487255689 0.067059652881 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379841413554 0.210909579961 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.261868373768 0.0618886996521 423% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.