these days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reserved.
Spending long grueling hours in traffic gridlock has become the typical commute routine for cities' residents, owing to urbanization. Now days, city-dwellers reckoned to form 45 percent as of 2014, ever escalating population in metropolitans has grabbed attention as a concerning trend, than it did in the last decades. it is an agonizing issue governments struggle to abate, nonetheless, poor management as centralization is what such calamity stems from.
To begin with, although being the most appealing effects, roads congestion, energy consumption, and pollution are overshadowed by far more terrifying and alarming consequences. To illustrate, a loop of the high cost of living, homelessness, and crimes rate are considered a nightmare for citizens. Not to forget the environmental impact, should cities keep up on growth. All above, due to concentrating location first of industry, then services, cities tend to expand rabidly, thus draw labor in from rural areas, seeking new employment with a higher wage, to boost their income, by enhancing their career opportunities. Not until authorities impose prudent lows to forcibly relocate facilities, by establishing quality schools, well-equipped health centers, not to forget the recreational amenities , will this problem be solved.
Another issue of interest, as controversy as over-population , is de-population; It can provoke negative environmental pressures on agricultural biodiversity production -since farming is the main economic activity-, which result in return to food insecurity. In addition, while local businesses effectuated by the lack of employees, as well as costumer, leading to their closure, young people leave for cities in search of vacancies. Such paradoxical situation is thought to cause issues, as child labor, and drop of school enrollment, not to mention families breakdown.
Encouragement of non-farm income sectors in rural areas, Improvement of the rural livelihood sector, allocation of credit facilities, and establishment of basic social and economic Infrastructure, are the key factors to upgrade villages' satisfaction, not forgetting decentralization as crucial procedure in achieving balance.
Moreover, populous urban centers, has been linked to stress, anxiety, and depression , among others psychological effects, which leads to a strain on social pleasantness. On the other hand, Depleted of their younger generations, rural communities are left with increasingly aging populations, those who would normally become community leaders, establish local businesses, or contribute to the overall vitality of rural places have instead exported their talents and energies elsewhere. Municipalities should handled such discouragement by investing in local brands, implementing free taxing police, alongside public awareness on the importance of one's heritage.
In the whole, the chronic loss of young people to urban centers, with the cramped, overwhelmed cities, are supposed to be treated as one problem branches into many, rather than individuals matters taking separately. Taking into consideration, that preventing the degradation of human recourses in rural areas, might be this century achievement, should these resolution succeed.
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- these days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reserved. 78
- With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not close as they used to be, Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 26.3917525773 288% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 30.0 3.85567010309 778% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2776.0 937.175257732 296% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 465.0 206.0 226% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96989247312 4.54256449028 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 3.78020617076 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34811537185 2.54303337028 132% => OK
Unique words: 314.0 127.690721649 246% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675268817204 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 860.4 290.88556701 296% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.41237113402 135% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 1.44329896907 831% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
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Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 4.34317383033 169% => OK
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Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325462658112 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320762652597 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604924633699 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224763521781 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
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flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 70.7449484536 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 7.45979381443 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 8.71597938144 202% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.6 7.59969072165 153% => OK
difficult_words: 195.0 41.2886597938 472% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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