Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
In current's challenging world, people love to explore untouched or challenging places for travel purpose. So these type of adventurous tours has plus as well as minus points too. This view mentions briefly hereunder.
Most mankind has a basis hobby is called travelling. People keen to travel different places like beaches, historical places, hills station in their leisure time. But nowadays, tourist want to go and enjoy at challenging places like the Sahara deserts and the Antarctic etc.
To explore, this type challenging places people can increase their confidence level as well as health due to basic guidelines published by authority. Additionally, it is obvious that its a lifetime achievement feeling for them. Moreover, it also creates the motivational story for rest of the population. Untouched or difficult places biggest difficulty is financial conditions. Inhabitants biggest challenge is survival, therefore if tourist travel there then the economy can increase in these areas. And local people can live the good life. Last but not the least, the world can know the tradition, the culture of the inhabitant of these areas.
Against the benefits, it has too many disadvantages too. Likewise, pollution can increase in this beautiful, natural places. The study shows that pollution is increased by 20% in last ten years in the Antartic. In other words, the climate is going to disturb reason of pollution. Furthermore, figures also say that tourist death is also increased in the adventurous places due to lack of safety measures.
Finally, difficult places have tremendous God's beauty with physical challenges. So people are attracted to it and explore the places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'places the biggest'.
Suggestion: places the biggest
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Inhabitants the biggest'.
Suggestion: Inhabitants the biggest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, as to, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38867924528 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.839371267 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 290.88556701 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3364534325 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155354643347 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420262217085 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535787234052 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872704970952 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353732715858 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.09 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 41.2886597938 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.