Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
To begin, Non-age is considered the most diaphanous and vulnerable stage of human lives.
Immensely burgeoning cut throat competition round the corner and the expectation of Parents,
acquaintances at times are self – hortatory to achieve the acme of success. However in juxtaposition,
the hot button claims whether these high expectations from them can boomerang and hamper
them physically, mentally and socially. To my opinion, this standpoint can be analysed through
case by case study.
Driven by the sense of imagination for their child to achieve the greatest success or sometimes
Which they could not achieve and societies peers , as soon as the child comes into live
they are burdened with surfeit of expectation. Unlike a decades ago, children of today’s
generation starts attending pre-schools and classes in second or third years of age. A Harvard
of psychological and behavioral magazine research says that “ Almost seventy to eighty percent
of parents in US admit their child in early age in pre–schools because they want their children to
pick up the race of life as soon as possible besides they do not get the time from their hectic work
Schedule to pressure cook their kids.
Furthermore , there are many research studies which claim that the high bar expectation consciously or subconsciously influence the child’s performance. A university Magazine report says that , how the variation in the result of paper test seen among two groups of high school students ,out of which one was told the test is important for the students to get admission into high ranked university. While the other were apprised that the test was just normal Non-diagnostic. And unsurprisingly the latter group performed better in the test.The proliferation of suicidal attempts and drug indulgence under academic pressure are becoming pervasive among adults across the world. According to a counselling program research in India, almost 6 students commits suicide in a day under the effect of depression and academic pressure and this is more prevalent among the students of high ranked universities and institutions.
Hence to conclude , child and Adults should be given enough space for their overall mental , emotional and physical well – being . Parents have to stop keeping high bar expectation from them and monitoring them 24/7 times to prevent it does not thwart their growth. Along with the reasonable expectation We should let the puerile enjoy and learn from their mistakes and thus exhorting a sense of auto-didactic attitude in them .
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- People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement andexplain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and 66
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 50
- Schools should do more to prepare students for the non-academic aspects of childhood.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developin 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, third, thus, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 5.05154639175 396% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 26.3917525773 227% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 937.175257732 233% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 406.0 206.0 197% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38916256158 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 3.78020617076 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94003369216 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 127.690721649 190% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598522167488 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 290.88556701 225% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6704586167 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.866666667 76.5299724578 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0666666667 16.8248392259 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.29896907216 349% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 2.54639175258 1374% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139764785836 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397987618323 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375403432056 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436131148489 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470336736574 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 8.37731958763 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 41.2886597938 283% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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