Topic: The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. Summarise the information and Write at least 150 words.
The given charts declineate the oulook of a school in 2004 and its transformations for a period of 20 years.
It is apparently observed from the illustrations that there are a number of differences such as the remarkable increase of attenders and the shrinkage of sport field.
Looking at the chart in more details, in 2004, merely 600 students attending to this school. Both school buildings are separated by a path. It is deserved noticing that there is merely a road running to a sole car park which is opposite to main entrance to the Northwest.
One notable change will be that the gradual increase to 1000 students enrolling to school. The shrinkage of sport field will make room for the third school building which is adjacent to cark park 2. Another major change to the area will be the addition of road running from maintrance to the second parking area. Finally, no changes will be made to the location of the original car park and main entrance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to notice'.
Suggestion: to notice
...are separated by a path. It is deserved noticing that there is merely a road running to ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, finally, if, look, second, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67110069289 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7643372177 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153064076472 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694835465255 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521963962825 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887295523417 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528040665267 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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