Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Partially agreed to the above sentence. As there are now day socio economic changes happening in every society irrespective of geographical locations. Especially in the developing countries, gender ration is changing and changes has been observed in the social mind sets also.
As the industrial scenario has been changed in recent past from manufacturing to IT and working style, requiring rapidly coping up with the time demands. Now the requirement of the skill is huge and availability is lagging. More ever the women are wanting to grow in their economic as well as educational status as same as men. Further family become nucleus and more responsibilities has to carry out and should shouldered by both men and women. Women that are mothers are teaching to their children and shaping their own career by enhancing their skills.
So universities are also required to support the industries as well as the social responsibilities by providing the educational opportunities to both men and women equally without gender bias. Further this is a constitutional right of all citizens of our country.
I would partially agree to the above sentence for the reason for equal in numbers. I think we should not restrict this for sake of numbers but for sure the intelligence of an individuals. If the more women are qualifying and wanting to learn and educate themselves than men then universities shall not deny them because of numbers and visa –vise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s been observed in the social mind sets also. As the industrial scenario has been c...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ability is lagging. More ever the women are wanting to grow in their economic as well as ed...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...umbers but for sure the intelligence of an individuals. If the more women are qualifying and w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'i think', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225296442688 0.220444632235 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.181818181818 0.167888034529 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0869565217391 0.0606518309736 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0750988142292 0.0506257000042 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0395256916996 0.118615021944 33% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126482213439 0.107062808482 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0869565217391 0.041066498444 212% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.0102337045 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355731225296 0.0385302599488 92% => OK
Particles: 0.00790513833992 0.00132118243153 598% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.0714148451538 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0158102766798 0.0191574576366 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00395256916996 0.00930345855455 42% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1451.0 1141.60824742 127% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.134020619 115% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09663865546 5.53046319177 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78085437643 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357142857143 0.284621296913 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285714285714 0.211203875043 135% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197478991597 0.133321485273 148% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13025210084 0.0843313296314 154% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0102337045 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600840336134 0.622163163488 97% => OK
Word variations: 61.4788545356 62.8969750728 98% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3076923077 16.4300151701 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9433030134 44.7399317507 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 90.9928171075 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 16.4300151701 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.692307692308 0.613754768223 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 46.8791208791 37.5504026743 125% => OK
Elegance: 1.48 1.13073093955 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196324066266 0.331212695627 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0974018252224 0.0927372745006 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0815880123668 0.0736520305886 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524684052791 0.579516596996 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123274829175 0.180689518051 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085423559636 0.122183219658 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377947850086 0.0765303033291 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.322337811147 0.211926503985 152% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0619222230337 0.0737400523855 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138288018449 0.203819188451 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438534937951 0.067151250289 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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