While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While
you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• explain what happened
• apologize7 for the accident
• tell your friend what you plan to do about the bowl
Dear Robin,
Hope you are doing good and had a great vacation experience. I am writing here to let you know about the china clay bowl that was kept in your drawing hall rack; was got broken by me.
Actually, on last Sunday. I was sitting alone and getting bore, so I decided to clean the display rack of drawing hall to utilize time. While cleaning bowl suddenly i lost my balance and bowl slips from my grip and fall freely on floor and broke in to pieces.
I know it was quite expensive you bought it from Asian handicraft fair. I am deeply regret on this incident and want to apologize on my deed.
I have ordered a fresh bawl from same handicraft vendor for you and it will be delivered at your place by 05 of January.
Kindly accept it as my apology.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Your mate
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lize time. While cleaning bowl suddenly i lost my balance and bowl slips from my ...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'regretted'.
Suggestion: regretted
...from Asian handicraft fair. I am deeply regret on this incident and want to apologize ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ent and want to apologize on my deed. I have ordered a fresh bawl from same han...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38961038961 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1771072363 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4375749007 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4545454545 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200062550723 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682962687672 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618010468344 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786396981603 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511305662344 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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