Dear Pooya
I hope this letter finds you well. I deeply regret to let you know, unfortunately your antique bowl is broken. Honestly, today the weather was extremely hot in your apartment and air condition was out of the order. Therefore, I had to open the window and suddenly a heavy wind blew and the bowl fell and broke.
Shamefully, I know that bowl was your family memento and that was very expensive. So I must apologize for troubling you with this matter.
Although I took care of your apartment, I was not a good trustee and please accept my apology.
Anyway I thought so much and I found a great solution. I talk about this matter with master of handicrafts in Isfahan and fortunately he told me bowl can be repaired. I am so sorry again and I am waiting for you to come back.
Yours sincerely
Farhood
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[2]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'regret letting'.
Suggestion: regret letting
...pe this letter finds you well. I deeply regret to let you know, unfortunately your antique bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, honestly, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48322147651 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55652727724 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664429530201 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8888278019 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.7272727273 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5454545455 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289733590559 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104291541015 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603993194514 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159580179845 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740782637727 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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