Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,A)Introduce yourself,B)Explain what the problem is,C)Suggest solutions to the problem

Dear Sir/Madam,

I feel the need to write to you due to the constant nuisance being created in the neighbourhood due to drilling work being carried out the next-door neighbours. Allow me to elaborate.

I am a resident of University Avenue and have been living here for more than 3 decades with my family. We really do not meddle with anyone’s affair or bother anyone, but that is not what we have been getting in return.

We have never faced a situation that is this extreme. There has been a construction project that has been going on next-door. The rate of drilling in the basement has gone up tremendously and is bothering us a lot. The work is being carried out without a permit. However, a permit is a secondary issue here, but the noise level is extreme and has affected our daily life. Moreover, I moved to the neighbourhood because it seemed like a very calm place to live. The experience is turning bitter after all these years.

Consequently, I request you to take actions with regards to the said issue. I would recommend that the construction project be stopped or the intensity of drilling should be reduced. Further, the workers could also be recommended to use light machinery.

I hope that some effective steps would be taken promptly.

Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I feel the need to write to you due to t...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be taken promptly. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, after all, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83482142857 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79770413688 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638392857143 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7573978678 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6875 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117766938092 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334195095857 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318656248089 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553285287667 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259552130421 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.