Work is done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:- Introduce yourself- Explain what is the problem is- Suggest solution to the problem

Essay topics:

Work is done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:

- Introduce yourself

- Explain what is the problem is

- Suggest solution to the problem

Dear Sir,

My self Milan Desai, I am loyal resident of city council since last 10 years. I live at Park Street lane in Bradford area. I am writing this epistle to you regarding disturbance caused by construction of new lane in my neighborhood area. As I am already aware about the redevelopment plans of city council to make this place beautiful to live but it also creating a lot of inconvenience for the local residents too.

Firstly, I would like to inform you that the contractor had parked his heavy equipment just outside my front gate. Due to this, I am not able to park my car in my garage. Besides this, the construction work is going from last three months, which made it completely impossible for our children to play in the nearest garden, especially near the proposed alternative route.

I request you to speed up the construction process and I also want you to take severe actions against contractor for unnecessary delay in the project work.

I look forward to your prompt action and response in resolving the matter above.

Yours Sincerely,

Milan Desai.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 302, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the nearest'.
Suggestion: in the nearest
...ely impossible for our children to play in nearest garden, especially near the proposed al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89784946237 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76181388029 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4898121141 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139471491496 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564012341907 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327298024022 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764902969733 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288785954679 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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