Write a complaint letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say
– When did you use the service?
– What was wrong with the service provided?
– What actions for improvement do you suggest?
Hi Travel insurance Team,
I'm writing to you to get the insurance covered for my phone which I had recently purchased an iPhone 11 at the apple apple store next to the railway station in Adayar. I had been on a leisure trip to Thailand last weekend and stayed in a resort which had an amusement park nearby. I visited the park the very next day I arrived at the resort and thought of taking my phone to capture some memorable pictures and videos. I had hung my phone around my neck in a plastic bag which was tied with a thick lace. As I was nearing the final ride near the pool, I realised my phone was missing and I went and checked in the previous rides, it was nowhere to be found. Also, I gave an official complaint at the help desk present in the venue who promised that they would contact me in case they found my device, but I haven't heard from them ever since.
I just recalled that I had purchased the phone along with a 1-year insurance with your company. I need to raise a request to get a new phone. Kindly take a request at the earliest and please provide a suitable solution as per the policy. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Anand Raj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Travel insurance Team, Im writing to you to get the insuran...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Hi Travel insurance Team, Im writing to you to get the insurance cov...
^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: apple
... recently purchased an iPhone 11 at the apple apple store next to the railway station in Ad...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ure some memorable pictures and videos. I had hung my phone around my neck in a p...
^
Line 5, column 813, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... me in case they found my device, but I havent heard from them ever since. I...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...avent heard from them ever since. I just recalled that I had purchased the...
^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Anand Raj
^^^
Line 13, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from you soon. Yours sincerely, Anand Raj
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29515418502 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26122107874 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599118942731 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2893989926 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0852032563493 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322225284428 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030599414341 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0381080045769 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393640301939 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.