Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Diva, and I am a frequent traveler in your IndiGo airlines. I usually feel ecstatic to have my boarding from your association. My recent unpleasant experience has compelled me to pen down my grievances. Recently, I had flown to Malaysia in ‘’AI 1487 flight’’ from Delhi, India on 23rd July at 9.00 PM.
There was a woman, seated beside me who had to nurse her child as he was crying. It was so miserable situation to her and also to me because she could not see the nursing room vacate for more than half an hour, due to which it was difficult for me to fall asleep.
I would be kind to inform you that you need to take care of each and every passenger travelling and look after their comfortableness during their long-distance journey. It would be highly appreciated if you could arrange 3 or 4 extra rooms for the nursing purpose so that there could be no disturbance to co-passengers.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Diva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsideration. Yours faithfully, Diva
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79428571429 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11074503839 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708571428571 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8328081431 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122162096697 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487717827189 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299276717419 0.0603063233224 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715919199642 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313674199718 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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