Write a letter to a colleague who gave you a book that helped you for presentation at work.
Describe the presentation
Why was it important?
How did it help you?
Dear Naina,
I hope you and your family are doing great.
First of all, i want to thank you for lending me your book. It has been a great help for me during the last few days while preparing my presentation. As you know, i have been discussing this with you from the last few months about my presentation on the marketing strategy for the sales of IT equipment. This presentation was really important for me, as my promotion completely depended on the success of this.
While i was preparing the content, i realized that your book, which i borrowed from you for few days, 'marketing knowhow' by Martin has amazing topics related to the sales strategies and marketing values, which could help me form my ideas more effectively, and yes it did help a lot.
Further, not only everyone loved my presentation format, but also i have got several appreciations for marvellous ideas to elevate the IT equipment sale. Again, i can't thank you enough for lending me your book for this long, which really saved my life and brought me a promotion.
Please let me know when can you visit my place or should i come to yours? we celebrate this win and off-course, the party is on me.
Hope to see you soon.
Best wishes
Harpreet
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-08-08 | nainsi1991@gmail.com | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Naina, I hope you and your family are doing gre...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mily are doing great. First of all, i want to thank you for lending me your b...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ended on the success of this. While i was preparing the content, i realized t...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... While i was preparing the content, i realized that your book, which i borrow...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ntent, i realized that your book, which i borrowed from you for few days, market...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which i borrowed from you for few days, marketing knowhow by Martin has amazing ...
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Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...iations for marvellous ideas to elevate the IT equipment sale. Again, i cant thank you...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o elevate the IT equipment sale. Again, i cant thank you enough for lending me yo...
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Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...elevate the IT equipment sale. Again, i cant thank you enough for lending me your bo...
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Line 11, column 58, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...w when can you visit my place or should i come to yours? we celebrate this win an...
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Line 11, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...sit my place or should i come to yours? we celebrate this win and off-course, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, while, as to, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63470319635 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58441841267 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4896075363 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5833333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277169359751 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109036022695 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638873317086 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154181852629 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610105803044 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.