Dear Mr Brown,
I am writing to formally complaint about few young boys who left their dogs unsupervised to run in the society in a barbarian manner leading to an extremely perilous situation.
Allow me to elaborate this situation for you for better understanding. There are many adolescents who gather in the society's play ground in the evening with their dogs. But instead of controlling them they often leave them open to roam around which is quite fatal as there are a slew of small children playing that possibly can get hurt from them. It is due to the fact that these children get attracted to them and sometimes go near to them to pet. However, most of the dogs are violent and can attack at any moment.
Hence, I urge you to take strict steps to tackle this issue in order to prevent any major accident. This can be done by imposing a rule that no resident will leave their pets unleashed in the society. I believe this will resolve the problem.
I hope that the matter will be dealt with as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a barbarian manner" with adverb for "barbarian"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...dogs unsupervised to run in the society in a barbarian manner leading to an extremely perilous situat...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
...und which is quite fatal as there are a slew of small children playing that possibly...
^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s soon as possible. Yours faithfully, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60846560847 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45082654802 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671957671958 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.835763321 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1818181818 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126323201349 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366201553738 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516663733828 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711339584726 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749290396697 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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