Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain you regarding a severe condition in my neighborhood.
I have been residing my town almost 5 years. It is the most peaceful and polite town up to date but recently, several families came to our neighborhood and they have been creating a hazardous situation in our society. These new families have teenagers and they also have few untrained dogs. Every evening they come to the streets and open a competition of dogs for that reason pedestrians cannot walk smoothly and older people cannot stroll over the parking area either. The most terrible thing is last Sunday, one girl of my neighbor get attacked by one of this dog. Those dogs are not vaccinated yet. Those teenagers parents seem nonchalant about their children's doing.
In view of this, It is my humble request to issue a letter, on the behalf of your office to those adolescents parents to aware about the grim of this situation. Also, request them to take necessary steps against it.
Anticipating your response and support very urgently.
Yours faithfully,
Jony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ning they come to the streets and open a competition of dogs for that reason pede...
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Line 5, column 621, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
...are not vaccinated yet. Those teenagers parents seem nonchalant about their childrens d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98351648352 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62594253669 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2977586093 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5833333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132449650276 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410549135111 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461520033259 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759631092919 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482195804855 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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